I am not a still life

[G.O.D.F.A.T.H.A.]

I am like
the frames of a movie
but who
can stay
from beginning to end
to see me move?
Instead
too may see
only a few frames
here and there
and think
that is me.


Who will stay
long enough
to see the frames connect
to see me move
and glide and soar
and change
or even see
how they themselves
come and go
through my frames?

[QueenWarriorNefertari]

On the level of heart, this jawn shows yours. I dig that truism in any poetry. Are you trying tell us something? What I gather is there is more to you than meets the eye -- you want us to dig deeper into you, or at least know that what we are getting isn't all there is to you. Am I on it?

Because I know you dig feedback and critique, let me know if you desire this for you works and I'll provide it. For now, I'm just in bidness of giving love to those trying to share their souls through wordsoundpower.

Share more, souljah.



p.s. DIGGING that signature!

[Kweku_Omowale]

likea film screen,such is life,thru the eyes of lense
who will be there,to see,you move? just remember like gil scott heron said
" the revolution wont be televised"