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This isn't very poetic; I consider it prose. I feel you could refine it, and write more. It doesn't read or feel done, yet, but you are pushing towards a great effort thus far. Keep at it. So far, its cool...but I'm waiting to hear what you're to say -- thats whats most unclear for me.

Just my 2 pennies.

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