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01-26-2009
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| Excuse me Excuse me for being me Being the unwanted thought The endless feeling that eats away your mind Deeply entering the most inner Excuse me for saying what you wanted to say Screaming out your hidden thoughts Your stashed away emotions With my stretched out moans Making sounds that resemble messages Ringing in your ears Then I burn your tongue Causing you to recite me Repeating my mistakes in your words Excuse me for dancing in your eyes Luring you to move to my rhythms As I become your envied persona Who you want to be but can't since your trapped Working to survive so that one day you can hope to be me Excuse me most of all for being you The you, you don't see You, you tend to reject But you that you know I'm here Stuck in your mind Eating at your conscious Telling you to be more Excuse me for pointing you in the direction You desire to be in But don't blame me for not being me Blame you for staying who you know your not Jalili B. Jimiyu Yeah it's copyrighted © 2009
__________________ "We may be investigated, incarcerated or murdered for the things we dare to write... But we are young and Black, fearless and free... Every poem, every incandescent word is a personal revolution" Celeste "ayasha" Golden (my queen rest well and I'll see you when I get there.) http://awrittenlifeapoeticsoul.blogspot.com/ www.themindkitchen.com  |
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02-11-2009
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the imagery created by this piece was so real and heart felt
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