"The Death Black Consciousness" Poem

[JAYBLACK]

HERE GOES A NEW POEM I JUST WROTE!!! THIS IS SOMETHING THAT I HAD ON MY MIND AND DECIDED TO PUT ON PAPER, AND NOW THE INTERNET. I HOPE EVERYBODY ENJOYS THE POEM AND PLEASE LEAVE ME SOME FEEDBACK AND/OR CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. THIS POEM IS 100% MADE BY ME AND IF YOU SEE IT ANYWHERE JUST KNOW WHERE IT CAME FROM!!!


"The Death Of Black Consciousness" By J. Black

Today I found out that Black Consciousness had been murdered,
Stabbed 89 times by a number of person's,
And although the circumstances surrounding the death are still a little vague,
The List of suspects could fill up a page,
Capitalist, Cointelpro, The FBI, or maybe The CIA,
So the very same day I examined the facts,
And came to the conclusion that they all worked with each other,
Because they all lended a hand in Black Consciousness's Murder,
But what surprised me the most is the tracks they couldn't cover,
Cause the last words of Black Consciousness was "E Tu My Brother"


:THIS IS MY SECOND POEM AND IF YOU HAVEN'T CHECKED OUT THE FIRST ONE HERE'S THE LINK:

http://www.assatashakur.org/forum/po...-new-post.html

[Pragmatic]

Originally Posted by JAYBLACK

"E Tu My Brother"

This was classic brotha...~ and it goes very hard for the poem, indeed very deep with the "e tu" part, righteous.

Peace be upon you

[JAYBLACK]

Originally Posted by pragmatic

this was classic brotha...~ and it goes very hard for the poem, indeed very deep with the "e tu" part, righteous.

peace be upon you

yea i didn't know who all would get it the concept..with the stabbing and the "e tu my brother" part, but i really appreciate you commenting on it though..